Soupcat's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Tutorial_3_Shading]

...no

why not use the gradient fill? :p
no it was good....but i don't really found this a good tutorial, i don't really beleive you need to critic the content, because there is always someone that will use this information. So really work on your lay out man, add music, nice introduction (finish it at least before Newgrounds submission) background color thingy (white is a bit....white) and nice looking buttons, etc
just kepe at it, and....give nicer examples, your examples looked like crap (yes i can do better shading on your way :p

Cheers

MrblueSky responds:

Ok,
as Much as i like the advice.
Please please shut now.
If you had looked at it, its For beginners the tighter the cirles are together the better the shading is the circles were tighter because that was easier for a beginner.
And Also Look at some of my art on cc and then i will change your mind

[Blam Game]

You gave this entry a 5,

raising its score from 2.3854 to 2.3909!

I know it's not much, but i had one more vote left before my experience points kicked in, so i thought "why not" You see mlike a really nice guy.

Well the game wasn't all that superb if may be onnest, i compared it a bit with the one in the flash portal....i really like the idea, cuz that game in the portal has me hooked, and if it where with a score, like yours, then i would know what to do all day long...but this, it misses something, i think it's the graphics, but a programmer is not an animator right ;) !
I liked the music, not annoying-distracting, but catchy!
I gave humor a 6 cuz you seem like a funny chap XD
Oh well, good job, (i will keep an eye on you, your "drawing board" entry is really nice!)

Cheers

....i dunno if this'll get a response, but it's worth a shot ! (i like responses :p)

ssjskipp responds:

Heh, yah ^^;, this was one I did a while ago. Thanks for the review and the vote.

[Katakana Game v0.25]

Good, but could have more features

Okay, i liked it, the music is very well chosen ,the lay out and introduction has a good design (simpel is safe).
Game play isn't all that difficult, very easy tooo understand and get the hang of it.
Content is a bit poor, and good be expanded more.
the Addictivity grade is very low, you get bored of doing the same thing over and over, and there isn't much goal in it, lack of bonus games etc....
But i give this a pass.

Cheers

LuckyLollipopLad responds:

Thanks for the review. Good coverage.

Yeah, the basic gameplay is very repetitive. It's just a framework I came up with a while ago, with which folk could maybe learn some stuff.

I'll try and think of ways to add variety, but I'm not sure I can change the basic format terribly much.

What kinda bonus games do you mean? If you have any ideas, give me a PM and I'll totally credit any new ideas I use.

[Mayhem In The Skies!]

YAY, the potatoas are hot!

I think i saw the explosion a tutrial around here, issit yours (too lazy to check the autors)
oh well i like it, (i didn't read the instructions so i just fired at the babies, that was fun) nice graphics and stuff, good music, loved the preloader, so it's good, i even think frontpage good, but thats up to tom fulp.....or what?

cheers

[Super Smash Flash]

DUUUUUDE

Man, i own the game myself, and you did an exelent job making a flash version! i have no complains with 1 minor exeption, my computer is a bit slow, so a oppertunity for lowering the quality would be nice.
for the rest, love it! i'm not surprised for you having frontpage!

[Game Snake]

prrrt

sgood, not very original but good, BUT i found a bug, if you right click and press play the game restarts and you can control the snake at the tank logo frame, also if you then press play, the game is kinda fucked up, dunno if anyone would do that, but i did, and i thought i'd just let you know

[FMA Dress Up]

nice, but...

Yeah, i just got myself into the FMA series (say yesterday, but already seen the first 10 episodes, so pretty much know what's it mainly about) and i love it, but when u make a dress up game next time, make the objects click on the propper place, there is a tutorial around here somewhere on how to do that, it's makes it look a bit more proffessional, oh yeah i dunn oif it's my computer, but the sound quality lacks here and there...but it's one of the best series to make a dress up about! nice work!

[NG Clock Robbery Sim]

prrt

man, that where some bad graphx, and sound, bad sound and graphx, work on that! you've got potentiol...