Was it me, or is that last line a bit out of sync?
Was it me, or is that last line a bit out of sync?
It was incredibly out of sync. I haven't used flash in years and I couldn't be arsed to put in any actual effort when I made this.
Seeing that I loved the animations concept and execution, I feel bad for even mentioning this, but it has to be said; It doesn't have a commercial feel to it.
It feels more like a standalone cartoon than a promotion or advertisement for Newgrounds.
You said that you kept it short to "keep the commercial vibe", but keeping it short isn't enough. A cartoon needs to have more design/typography features to come across as a commercial.
Please don't take this as negative criticism, I'm simply criticizing the subject you submitted it under.
It's still probably one of the best submissions in the commercial contest so far and I bet you'll do great.
Goddamnit I always wanted to see Newgrounds in Real Life city format. You nailed it dude. Great job.
Ya I can definitely see your point, I've really gotten used to working in the style of standalone cartoons over the years. Glad you liked it nonetheless! Thanks for the review!
so wait, video is going to be accepted here now? Sweet.
ockeroid sent me here!
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Dont say shit like "worship me" or whatever. Not even as a joke. It makes you look arrogant and you don't get to be arrogant in your first animation. Try staying humble about your work until you get better.
Thanks, but I was only reflecting on how most popular animators have a 'God' like status, I wasn't trying to be arrogant :) Thanks for the comment :D
WHERE IS MY GODESS ASUKA. NEEDS MORE RED LOVE BABY
I dont get why this didn't get frontpaged or a better score. It's simply amazing. The fuck is going on here?
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Yep. Which guessing from your one sentence and 2.5 star review.... that makes the animation mediocre? I don't get it.
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