FMA soundtrack?
Okay, I gave it a four outta five.
One, I really liked the soundtrack, did you got it from (read: heared it) Fullmetal Alchemist? Because that's where I recognize it from. And I really like that soundtrack.
Two, the overall image you are showing us looks really, dark, and dramatic wich is quit good for a rest between all the blood and gore you see here on NG, so thats a plus for originality.
and Three, the graphics. They where really clean and finished, no rough edges or anything.
Overall, this was plain awesome for the soundtrack. Then I got into the animation itself and was quit satisfied.
Cheers, and don't change the style, you are getting somewhere with this.